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Tuesday 16 April 2013

omaru creek.

Hi this is are story about omaru creek.Once upon time there was an eel named Nas. He lives with his family he has a mum and a dad and two brothers named lars and mars. He liked to play with his brothers in the river. Nas and his family ate worms and grubs. His game that he'd like to play was called, Call of Duty. It was his favorite game that he'd like to play. He always gets a headshot with his sniper 624 it was a very cool game. One day Nas noticed that people were throwing rubbish and leaking oil into the crystal clear water. He realised his home was getting polluted and other creatures were dying. His river was becoming polluted and it was called the Omaru creek.

1 comment:

  1. Great narrative Lukis. What could be a solution as to how to clean the river?

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