Persuasive argument

We should stay at school from monday to thursday and friday is part of the weekends. I disagree with this because children should go to school from monday to Friday. If we don’t then we will grow up and won’t learn then we will be dumb and we won't get a good job, And if we do learn then we can get a good job. Plus school is fun because our teachers can tell us good things to do and we can do even more good things so we can get good reports school is cool. I think we should have school for five days because so when we grow up we can get a good job. School is important.